Audience feedback

As our trailer, poster and magazine is all finished, me and another media student decided to get audience feed back from our target audience. The two boys in the clip are 17 and 18 which is perfect to evaluate our magazine, we asked them to see if they could spot the conventions used in a real media text which was Empire Magazine to our magazine were we tried to follow the conventions used. The negative side to our feedback is that we only used males, if we had females it would of gave us a more secure idea if what we done was conventional. Here is the feedback we received.

These are the two magazines that they were commenting on seeing the conventions that I followed.